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Unseen Beauty Finds a Way
I watch her as she writes down the answers
Her hair hanging across her face
Her hand scribbling writing down the teachers words.
All the while I watch her across from me
An arms distance away.
She’s beautiful, no ones told her.
No one has even acknowledged this fact
that what they see right before them is wonderful.
Are my eyes the only ones open?
Or are they asleep, lost in a dream?
Her posture holds scars
From friends before
Ones she's trusted, but nevermore.
Her shy stammer has abuse in store.
She doesn’t talk, wanting to not talk out of turn.
Trying to hide her flaws, having few to conceal
Tell mer just a bit more.
Her giggle as we talk, tells me what words can not describe
What I wanted to hear.
No matter the past, we have time to help
time to heal.
Her story is not clear
but her future beautiful.
Someone needs to tell her
the truth kept away for so long.
She looks up and smiles at me
I stare straight into her blue glorious eyes
"Your beautiful," I whisper
The title seems cheesy, but it works for the message I was trying to portray:)
Her hair hanging across her face
Her hand scribbling writing down the teachers words.
All the while I watch her across from me
An arms distance away.
She’s beautiful, no ones told her.
No one has even acknowledged this fact
that what they see right before them is wonderful.
Are my eyes the only ones open?
Or are they asleep, lost in a dream?
Her posture holds scars
From friends before
Ones she's trusted, but nevermore.
Her shy stammer has abuse in store.
She doesn’t talk, wanting to not talk out of turn.
Trying to hide her flaws, having few to conceal
Tell mer just a bit more.
Her giggle as we talk, tells me what words can not describe
What I wanted to hear.
No matter the past, we have time to help
time to heal.
Her story is not clear
but her future beautiful.
Someone needs to tell her
the truth kept away for so long.
She looks up and smiles at me
I stare straight into her blue glorious eyes
"Your beautiful," I whisper
The title seems cheesy, but it works for the message I was trying to portray:)
Published 20th Jan 2012
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20th Jan 2012 2:49am
I love this poem <3 its really good and I dont really think that the title is cheesy, just a tiny bit, but not enough for it to reaslly matter.
20th Jan 2012 1:07pm
22nd Feb 2012 1:44am
luved it
great write
and the title
fits perfectly
with this poem :)
keep up the awsome work:)
great write
and the title
fits perfectly
with this poem :)
keep up the awsome work:)
