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Like the Stars
I couldn't make it
I wasn't as good
As the stars
I couldn't walk there walk
I couldn't talk there talk
Like the stars
I couldn't act like they act
I couldn't move like they move
Like the stars
Why can't I be like them
Why arn't I as talented as them
Like the stars
There is tallent all around me
There is success all around me
But I am not like them
I am not like the stars
I wasn't as good
As the stars
I couldn't walk there walk
I couldn't talk there talk
Like the stars
I couldn't act like they act
I couldn't move like they move
Like the stars
Why can't I be like them
Why arn't I as talented as them
Like the stars
There is tallent all around me
There is success all around me
But I am not like them
I am not like the stars
Published 19th Jan 2012
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Anonymous
19th Jan 2012 11:20pm
Your not like the stars because they can't shine as bright as you :) and f*** them if they think your not good enough, because you are good enough, they were just to damn blind to see that. *hugs* <3
P.S. love the poem ;)
P.S. love the poem ;)
20th Jan 2012 1:11am
17th Jul 2012 8:13am
This poem is something a lot of people can relate to. It was a good topic you chose to write about. Good job.
29th Mar 2013 8:59pm
They are all right in such a way...but don't rest your laurels on what others say! Try to learn; for starters try having correct SPAG. You got nothing to lose, but everything to gain...
