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Hell

Flames, holy fire
Heat burns within
Days getting dire
Entrapped by sin

Cage I had made
Door I had locked
Mistakes I paid
Road I had walked

Fear of the truth
Trust of the lie
Rain on the roof
Falls from the sky

Death getting near
End getting close
All that you fear
Hurting the most

Devil and god
Good and evil
Demon will nod
Hope is feeble

Nightmare awaits
Dream is unknown
Two sides, one gate
One road is shown

Help out of reach
Hand, can't fold
Prayer and I preach
On fire but cold

Night falls from day
Moon hides the sun
Heart wants to stay
Soul fully numb
Written by CosiestPrism273 (Jordan Kunkel)
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Author's Note
Not perfect. It needs work so i thought i would ask for feedback.
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