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Twilight darkness
a swish of silk in twilight darkness
unveils the rose scented horizon
of sharing warm emotions
when we savor together
opalescent sweet dew
born from our
ritual union,
moment
to be
one.
unveils the rose scented horizon
of sharing warm emotions
when we savor together
opalescent sweet dew
born from our
ritual union,
moment
to be
one.
Published 15th Jun 2020
Author's Note
Painting by Miki De Goodaboom 'The lovers in Phabos' (Detail)
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Sorry but I did not see this as being in even the tiniest bit erotic. And certainly not explicit in any way. I was disappointed.
15th Jun 2020 6:15pm
As you like.
You'll find tons of 'erotic' poems going into descriptive details often to the degree I would describe them as 'word porn'.
I try to catch mental moods, if not understandable to everyone, doesn't matter to me.
Thanks for reading anyway.
You'll find tons of 'erotic' poems going into descriptive details often to the degree I would describe them as 'word porn'.
I try to catch mental moods, if not understandable to everyone, doesn't matter to me.
Thanks for reading anyway.
15th Jun 2020 9:30pm
Porn is porn. Erotic is erotic. This was neither, I felt. Maybe the error was to label it erotic?
17th Jun 2020 2:22pm
Maybe the error lies with the reader.
Or maybe there isn’t an error at all. What is erotic to some is not to others. We each have our preferences and kink.
Or maybe there isn’t an error at all. What is erotic to some is not to others. We each have our preferences and kink.
16th Jun 2020 6:45pm
17th Jun 2020 2:29am
17th Jun 2020 2:09pm
I think this is quite erotic and very well done. Let the readers do a little work! Let their mind be turned on and engaged! That is true erotic poetry, in my opinion. And you have done it well in this piece.
Also....formatting is great!
Also....formatting is great!
17th Jun 2020 2:17pm
Oh, that's really heartwarming to hear!
Thanks for reading and commenting, DaisyGrace.
Thanks for reading and commenting, DaisyGrace.
Anonymous
26th Jun 2020 4:29pm
Hey Twitter........luv the gracefulness in such few words........very creative and sensual.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
