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too strong
ah,
you said you would call to check up on me,
too late,
i'm going back down into the place where you told me to stay away from
last time it was harder to start,
this time it was too easy.
do you think that maybe this time it will not hurt as much
my nose is killing me its about 11 pm
ive taken a few hits and your still not there.
did you give up?
you said you would call to check up on me,
too late,
i'm going back down into the place where you told me to stay away from
last time it was harder to start,
this time it was too easy.
do you think that maybe this time it will not hurt as much
my nose is killing me its about 11 pm
ive taken a few hits and your still not there.
did you give up?
Published 13th Jan 2012
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13th Jan 2012 2:53pm
thats true the people u count on can not always be there when you need them the most. users are th ones that say they need the help but never seek it out they are the ones that count on people to always be there but their help eventually gives up
14th Jan 2012 6:16am
yeah i know that for a fact, but when you say no i dont want the help this time, i am not going to count on others to make me stop im going to do it myself then you know you are truly going to quit for good. thanks for the comment
14th Jan 2012 9:43pm
They only want you when they need you and when they need you they don't want you. I also agree with zenn. Great write
15th Jan 2012 5:02am
16th Jan 2012 3:08pm
sumtyms friends became few wen u nd dem n sumtyms ppl promise 2 b der but ther neva r....the only person u can count on is u...nxt tym say 'me, myself n i'...
16th Jan 2012 8:27pm
i agree always to a certain extent when people say stuff it is neither right or wrong. there is no such thing as the wrong answer.
