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I love in...
How fair would it be
to tell you what I love in?
(not in you)
....
Probably very...rubbish
You'd rather I tell you what our love is
What if its unaccomplished?
to tell you what I love in?
(not in you)
....
Probably very...rubbish
You'd rather I tell you what our love is
What if its unaccomplished?
Published 18th Apr 2020
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18th Apr 2020 10:40pm
Dear S,
An interesting question being pondered, “What if its unaccomplished?” I’m actually quite awed by the question itself and further, what the answer might be. This is an excellent write with many things to think about. H🌷
An interesting question being pondered, “What if its unaccomplished?” I’m actually quite awed by the question itself and further, what the answer might be. This is an excellent write with many things to think about. H🌷
19th Apr 2020 00:17am
Ah yes this questions where to or what it has been or if its still the case.I appreciate your view and comment.thank you H
18th Apr 2020 11:44pm
Unaccomplished or unattainable ?!
Either way, this is jammed packed with emotions that leave you feeling somewhat, hollow.
A fine write... 🌻
Either way, this is jammed packed with emotions that leave you feeling somewhat, hollow.
A fine write... 🌻
19th Apr 2020 00:21am
I have thought of the possibilities of what comes after "what if....." .Thank you for seeing that too
19th Apr 2020 00:27am
Well. I hope you find out... and that you won’t be disappointed with the final end point !
