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Starless Nights
Sunshine Fades,,,
Behind Cloudy Skies,,,
Bringing On,,,
Another Starless Night,,,
No Stars,,,
To Cast,,,
A Wish Upon,,,
No Moon,,,
To Light,,,
The Dark Path Home,,,
Starless Nights,,,
Always Fade Away,,,
And Make A Path,,,
For Sunlit Days,,,
Behind Cloudy Skies,,,
Bringing On,,,
Another Starless Night,,,
No Stars,,,
To Cast,,,
A Wish Upon,,,
No Moon,,,
To Light,,,
The Dark Path Home,,,
Starless Nights,,,
Always Fade Away,,,
And Make A Path,,,
For Sunlit Days,,,
Published 10th Jan 2012
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Anonymous
25th Apr 2014 9:00pm
The endless use of commas adds absolutely nothing to this piece, in fact they hold it back considerably.
It's a shame, because lyrically it's actually quite lovely. Thank you for the read never the less.
It's a shame, because lyrically it's actually quite lovely. Thank you for the read never the less.
