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George’s Classic First Line

Something in the way she moves”
no words are really even needed
motion is what prompts hope
the proximity will be closer

In the reaching of her intended destination
suitors are able to focus on details
twinkle in the eyes
curve of the lips

No need to restate what is so noticeably evident
with the physical qualities that lead the hopeful to stare
for in the end it is two way street and if she isn’t feeling
a potential love’s intensity is not going far
Written by JAZZMANOR
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Started out thing I had something to say and then it puttered out.
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