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George’s Classic First Line
Something in the way she moves”
no words are really even needed
motion is what prompts hope
the proximity will be closer
In the reaching of her intended destination
suitors are able to focus on details
twinkle in the eyes
curve of the lips
No need to restate what is so noticeably evident
with the physical qualities that lead the hopeful to stare
for in the end it is two way street and if she isn’t feeling
a potential love’s intensity is not going far
no words are really even needed
motion is what prompts hope
the proximity will be closer
In the reaching of her intended destination
suitors are able to focus on details
twinkle in the eyes
curve of the lips
No need to restate what is so noticeably evident
with the physical qualities that lead the hopeful to stare
for in the end it is two way street and if she isn’t feeling
a potential love’s intensity is not going far
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