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Lose
Calming my nerves with ease, you grin
Needing to have my seductive sins
C r a v i n g you like some filthy whore
Always do I come for more
Loving the rhythm with seething strokes
Liking the pressure, on my throat, with your crushing chokes
Penetrate me deep
Ram into me until I weep
Hold me against your burning body
Soothe my senses within your unnatural capacity
Missing you
Hating you
Yet..I do not care furthermore
If.. I can not have you anymore
If I do lose
It is what I choose
Needing to have my seductive sins
C r a v i n g you like some filthy whore
Always do I come for more
Loving the rhythm with seething strokes
Liking the pressure, on my throat, with your crushing chokes
Penetrate me deep
Ram into me until I weep
Hold me against your burning body
Soothe my senses within your unnatural capacity
Missing you
Hating you
Yet..I do not care furthermore
If.. I can not have you anymore
If I do lose
It is what I choose
Published 6th Jan 2012
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Anonymous
9th Jan 2012 2:59pm
how sexy is that - whew - and one should wonder why I try my hand at the erotic side of poetry - I suppose in truth because it brings feeling - be it sad happy or make your heart skip a beat - so yeah this poem made my heartbeat say mmmmmmmmmm - he he - nicely done - respectfully ^v^
9th Jan 2012 3:36pm
SirNight:)
Ive come to realise that with love its always in a state of 'sad-happy'.. maybe its a constant state? (JMHO)
LOL @"mmmmm craving". Thanks much for your comment.
[Rubix]
Ive come to realise that with love its always in a state of 'sad-happy'.. maybe its a constant state? (JMHO)
LOL @"mmmmm craving". Thanks much for your comment.
[Rubix]
Anonymous
9th Jan 2012 11:02pm
Love it all. Reminds me of a way back then and your closing lines are amazing.
10th Jan 2012 11:53am
