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MY VALENTINE'S DAY
It's now Valentine..
but I feel blue
Because you aren't mine
I just don't have you
Everyone is red...
Happy with someone
I feel so dead
Where has your love for me gone?
Why I have to be like this?
The torture that is......
All around holding a rose
All around getting a kiss
All so snuggly close...
I feel like I'll drown in it's immortal abyss
I get only your silence...
The best thing I get
A habit you have with me in much confidence
Draws for me to never forget
I guess it's what I must like...
It's not much I can say
I don't try arguing to cause a fight
Sad you can't even say Happy Valentine's day
I guess I won't be hearing from you tonight
Written by
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
(WRITER LYRICIST ARTIST)
Published 15th Feb 2020
Author's Note
Just a poem how I feel on this day of Valentine's day. Funny how it is... But none the ones I'm talking to that say they really like me don't message to even say Happy Valentine's Day and clueless when they say they do like me but can't say even happy Valentine's...
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15th Feb 2020 3:15am
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Re: Re. MY VALENTINE'S DAY
15th Feb 2020 4:51am
Thanks you hun, I do just I'm upset cause the guy that brags and says he likes me alot can't send me a message to even say Happy Valentine's. And long days we haven't talked So it bums me but well I know how it is now. Thanks again 🙂
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15th Feb 2020 3:27am
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Re: Re. MY VALENTINE'S DAY
15th Feb 2020 4:52am
Thank you hun yes I hope Indo find my real happiness in someone. Thanks again 🙂
Re. MY VALENTINE'S DAY
I know you are alone on V-Day makes me said everyone should have someone to talk to. Good poem keep on writing. There is also plenty of fish out there.
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Re: Re. MY VALENTINE'S DAY
15th Feb 2020 7:00am
Re. MY VALENTINE'S DAY
15th Feb 2020 8:20am
Guys are clueless. You can trust me on that, me being one of the most clueless of them all haha. Great ink.
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Re: Re. MY VALENTINE'S DAY
15th Feb 2020 12:47pm
Lol thanks you made me laugh haha...
Yea I strongly believe that but just hard believing that they know it's Valentine's day a very special day and can't out it to their hint that hey it's Valentine's day and I should try letting her know even to say happy Valentine's day. Even that would've made me happy. Now some dis say it but many didn't even if I posted a Valentine's video saying happy Valentine's day many didn't say it back but I cared to hear it from two in particular and neither did and both just didn't even message me both have me silence. Another guy whining all the time cause I won't give him attention in love way. I DON'T EVEN KNOW HIM! He don't say even Valentine's day and crying like a child OMG... Seriuosly it's bad but not going for just any guys... I do want someone special and someone that will care to even say the days special day meaning to me. Thanks again hun 🤗
Yea I strongly believe that but just hard believing that they know it's Valentine's day a very special day and can't out it to their hint that hey it's Valentine's day and I should try letting her know even to say happy Valentine's day. Even that would've made me happy. Now some dis say it but many didn't even if I posted a Valentine's video saying happy Valentine's day many didn't say it back but I cared to hear it from two in particular and neither did and both just didn't even message me both have me silence. Another guy whining all the time cause I won't give him attention in love way. I DON'T EVEN KNOW HIM! He don't say even Valentine's day and crying like a child OMG... Seriuosly it's bad but not going for just any guys... I do want someone special and someone that will care to even say the days special day meaning to me. Thanks again hun 🤗
Re. MY VALENTINE'S DAY
15th Feb 2020 2:29pm
sorry to hear that your day was sad poetess it should of been a day for lovers to enjoy and come even closer together as for thyself its been years since i took part in valentines day, but i remember when i did those special things for my QUEEN who has sadly went away...i send to you this special valentines gift of love with respect and hopefully who ever this man is will realize the kind of woman he has within you and do the right things by you for what one doesnt want someone eles will come get what they dont want just trust the process of love...respect dear poetess
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Re: Re. MY VALENTINE'S DAY
15th Feb 2020 3:44pm
Thank you stoney, well tbh this in my poem happened but something greater far worst happened and it has my father really disappointed and me too. He is very angry cause my nephew's I think did , did something very bad and he is having the worst Valentine's ever. It makes me very angry.
Re: Re. MY VALENTINE'S DAY
16th Feb 2020 10:55am
wow your nephew is off the chain your father couldnt even enjoy his day wow me personally its time to clean out the house its like they dont want to see knowone at peace and happy i feel for your father on so many levels he shouldnt have to put up with the nonsense from others who has no idea how bless they are to have someone in there corner in these times and times my heart goes out to your father and to you and your daughter back in my days they all would be put out fosho on the curb to find some other place to live it for you pays the cost to be the boss...respect
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Re: Re. MY VALENTINE'S DAY
16th Feb 2020 9:43pm
Thanks hun yes can't get no peace but yesterday both if them went with their mom no school till Tuesday so it'll be a while so glad.
Re: Re. MY VALENTINE'S DAY
16th Feb 2020 10:59pm
i am glad to hear your got some peace enjoy the rest of your sunday...respect dear poetess
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