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She Came
she came
she finally came out
out of the dark, the shadow
cut down from the rope that binds
leaving just The Word behind
we are blind when we don't see
not the surface but the grains
of time, of circumstance
leading and misleading
followers only looking for trust
who shall they trust if not their eyes
their hearts?
their minds?
it's a different time, evolved with a different kind
set in a different space
a separate place
a dying human race
we race for information but we don't dig
we take words for truth
even if only heard from one mouth
baby birds chirping for her food
any morsel will do
she
not like the rest
delves deep
into context
finding filler from fluff
weeding out the mindless stuff
the misspoke, the unawoke
or aware
she came
and the rest just disappeared
she finally came out
out of the dark, the shadow
cut down from the rope that binds
leaving just The Word behind
we are blind when we don't see
not the surface but the grains
of time, of circumstance
leading and misleading
followers only looking for trust
who shall they trust if not their eyes
their hearts?
their minds?
it's a different time, evolved with a different kind
set in a different space
a separate place
a dying human race
we race for information but we don't dig
we take words for truth
even if only heard from one mouth
baby birds chirping for her food
any morsel will do
she
not like the rest
delves deep
into context
finding filler from fluff
weeding out the mindless stuff
the misspoke, the unawoke
or aware
she came
and the rest just disappeared
Published 25th Jan 2020
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25th Jan 2020 4:58pm
25th Jan 2020 6:50pm
Lyrical and beautifully written Tim.
You've raised some wonderful thoughts but in the end everything falls in place, like it always does.
You've raised some wonderful thoughts but in the end everything falls in place, like it always does.
25th Jan 2020 10:39pm
Heavy and beautiful poem....
The use of words is excellent.
Greatly written
The use of words is excellent.
Greatly written
