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< Focus >

(~Focus on you, on you, on you)  

When our eyes meet, it’s so sudden,  
I can feel it.  
Your prism shining, it’s just starting,  
Can you feel it?  
 
In this sea of people,  
Only you and me.  
Oh baby~the moon freezes the tides,  
For us.  
   *‘alright’ changed to ‘for us’*  
 
In your light, eyes open wide,  
Yeah, yeah  
Heavenly beauty from above,  
Focus.  
 
On me~  
On you~  
 
Keeping me, breathless on the spot,  
Yeah, yeah.  
Trapping me inside, feel so lost,  
In your gaze.  
 
I can’t leave, you’re so strong.  
 
Do you feel my focus?  
I think that it’s real love.  
 
It’s like all time stops,  
Na na na  
In your eyes.  
 
Electrifying focus,  
Lightning strikes in my heart.  
 
All that matters is us,  
Na na na,  
Nothing else, now now.  
 
(Focus on you, on you, on you)  
Do you feel my focus?  
(On you, on you, on you)  
Do you feel my focus?  
 
Beautiful deer,  
In the darkness,  
Caught in flashlight.  
 
So suddenly,  
(Oh yeah)  
Feels frightening.  
 
Though I can see,  
Your doubt twitching,  
Blinking at me.  
 
Oh baby, but,  
We’ll only know, if we try~  
   *‘alright’ changed to ‘if we try’*  
 
(You and me~)  
 
Magnets, pull you closer, to my heart,  
Yeah, yeah  
Magnify thoughts, in camera glass,  
Focus.  
 
On me~  
On you~  
 
Keep us here, frozen, eyes are locked,  
Yeah, yeah  
In the dark, moonlight, shine on us,  
Crystal clear.  
 
The spotlight’s on us, girl.  
 
Do you feel my focus?  
I think that it’s real love.  
 
It’s like all time stops,  
Na na na  
In your eyes.  
 
Electrifying focus,  
Lightning strikes in my heart.  
 
All that matters is us,  
Na na na,  
Nothing else, now now.  
 
(Focus on you, on you, on you)  
Do you feel my focus?  
(On you, on you, on you)  
Do you feel my focus?  
 
Sparkling dream of white,  
Standing there like a glass doll.  
 
In your halo, words numbin’ up, oh~  
 
But every step that you take, girl  
Closer and closer,  
 
‘Till your eyes,  
Shine stars in my eyes.  
 
I can feel your focus,  
I see that it’s real love.  
 
Look in your heartbeat,  
Na na na,  
Love can’t hide.  
 
Electrifying focus,  
Fire sparks when we touch.  
 
All that matters is you,  
Na na na,  
I’m for you,  
Now, now.  
 
(Focus on you, on you, on you)  
Do you feel my focus?  
(On you, on you, on you)  
~I can feel your focus.  
 
~~  
 
Original song: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=JAjJ3dT-XiI  
 
** = changed original English lyrics
 
The original song is sung by the talented Kim Donghan (who is literally my third love after my family and friends) and these lyrics are made by me.
Written by ohmy_engrish (^-^)
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Author's Note
This is my take on love at first sight. **I really recommend also looking at the song, it’s absolutely spectacular and dance-y :)
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