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Understand This Remand As Demand
Rectified Though Denied Crucified
Mind's Eye Tongue Tied Ossified
Told One Must Abide Be Falsified
Not See What One Sees War Cry
I Shall Not Be Nullified I Am Justified
Demystified Terrorized Just Apologize !
Mind's Eye Tongue Tied Ossified
Told One Must Abide Be Falsified
Not See What One Sees War Cry
I Shall Not Be Nullified I Am Justified
Demystified Terrorized Just Apologize !
Published 9th Dec 2019
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30th Dec 2019 5:34pm
Hay Blackwolf, this was a very strong piece. Most of your work is but this one I just soaked up and loved.
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30th Dec 2019 9:04pm
Many thanks your way for the comment ,
and wonderful compliment , my friend...
But a beginner in the word dance , I am...
You en / in trance , many , including me with your words !
and wonderful compliment , my friend...
But a beginner in the word dance , I am...
You en / in trance , many , including me with your words !
30th Dec 2019 11:04pm
30th Dec 2019 11:23pm
I may not say it much...
And I was offline for a number of months...
But I pay attention to your work...
There are a number here I value in their word weaving
You most definitely have more than shown your ability !
And I was offline for a number of months...
But I pay attention to your work...
There are a number here I value in their word weaving
You most definitely have more than shown your ability !
30th Dec 2019 11:35pm
