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Writ Just 8 Days Bfore He Died......
WEE OLD FUCKS WHO ARE DYING TOO YOUNG, [ or perhaps:
OLD FUCKERS WHO DIED TOO YOUNG & DIDN'T CATCH ON ]
poordaddy poor daddy, "I had
badDreams badreams bad-dreams all-nite,
i'm nauseous alla time" can't eat, hard2swaller,
dialysis
dialysis
dialysis 12hrs every week, suckin
thee self-madebody'poison outta ye, + half thee life [like a 1/2Life?] as well
[outta ye] & yr bed'riding amp'u'tated Self, ridding yrSelf of pieces of self.....o
my sad Dad so Sad my Dad, old near-gone onelegged
seaman sailorman....dialy-ports a'springin'squirtin LifeJuice juslike old boats tend2do
whilst headin for thee
Big Sink....... o daddy dear daddy sad Dad, i should Quit
this futile artsying & ap'ologize to my Precious Few fanbase for
draggin'em in2 this
blabbering bladdering, unworthy-of-sustain'ence, hissy-pissing Art of Pretension
eXercise, cyber-waving yr suffering'round 4'all'2see, (even-if-only 5-10 look).....
The Voices tell 'me' to lead the way & go wit ye in2 dVoid, butt
i ain't Believed anyThing that's slid thru Me-Mind ever since the
elizabethan conflagration burned Me's Brain to [holy?] ashes...ahhhh, thee
tragiMiracle blessingCurse that's kept
MeMeMe sumwhat kindalike Alive! hearthumpin tho stitched&sewn wayfarlonger
than It
was Supposed to.........so here h'ere H'ere i be wit You, Saddaddy,
sittin vigil, &&&&&between tearylaffters, i'll hum
Ommmmmm over ye & play me prancetrance dancin flute overoverover
ye
til it time for wee To Go....&maybe yet even mo're[or less,or not]
XXXXXXXXXXXdkzk11aug2011xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
OLD FUCKERS WHO DIED TOO YOUNG & DIDN'T CATCH ON ]
poordaddy poor daddy, "I had
badDreams badreams bad-dreams all-nite,
i'm nauseous alla time" can't eat, hard2swaller,
dialysis
dialysis
dialysis 12hrs every week, suckin
thee self-madebody'poison outta ye, + half thee life [like a 1/2Life?] as well
[outta ye] & yr bed'riding amp'u'tated Self, ridding yrSelf of pieces of self.....o
my sad Dad so Sad my Dad, old near-gone onelegged
seaman sailorman....dialy-ports a'springin'squirtin LifeJuice juslike old boats tend2do
whilst headin for thee
Big Sink....... o daddy dear daddy sad Dad, i should Quit
this futile artsying & ap'ologize to my Precious Few fanbase for
draggin'em in2 this
blabbering bladdering, unworthy-of-sustain'ence, hissy-pissing Art of Pretension
eXercise, cyber-waving yr suffering'round 4'all'2see, (even-if-only 5-10 look).....
The Voices tell 'me' to lead the way & go wit ye in2 dVoid, butt
i ain't Believed anyThing that's slid thru Me-Mind ever since the
elizabethan conflagration burned Me's Brain to [holy?] ashes...ahhhh, thee
tragiMiracle blessingCurse that's kept
MeMeMe sumwhat kindalike Alive! hearthumpin tho stitched&sewn wayfarlonger
than It
was Supposed to.........so here h'ere H'ere i be wit You, Saddaddy,
sittin vigil, &&&&&between tearylaffters, i'll hum
Ommmmmm over ye & play me prancetrance dancin flute overoverover
ye
til it time for wee To Go....&maybe yet even mo're[or less,or not]
XXXXXXXXXXXdkzk11aug2011xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Published 28th Dec 2011
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29th Dec 2011 3:13am
Power... powerful. Only small thing I think stood out in the wrong way like a 1/2 life with the question. Maybe "half thee life, half thee halflife" or something such without question...only because you're telling us at that point. Letting us know how we should feel... for you for saddad and at that point no question can be asked of us... Our answer is inferior in this bad dream. The one legged sailorman leaky and squirting especially powerful.
29th Dec 2011 2:36pm
thnx mr.Bragg
1/2'life comment most perceptive....but tis intended as an awkward dumb-joke play-on-words,(damn! A 'Poet' who 'tries' to look awkward & dumb-jokey? h'owsick is that?) but yeah, i could 'see' myself using y'our version had that version versed itself to 'me' first...ha! funny 'ow that works, [or doesn't work] - i dunno - g'oddb'less ye buddy
1/2'life comment most perceptive....but tis intended as an awkward dumb-joke play-on-words,(damn! A 'Poet' who 'tries' to look awkward & dumb-jokey? h'owsick is that?) but yeah, i could 'see' myself using y'our version had that version versed itself to 'me' first...ha! funny 'ow that works, [or doesn't work] - i dunno - g'oddb'less ye buddy
29th Dec 2011 8:25pm
uh, yes, the Litter Gods have indeed blessed me.... &
i dig your stuff as well...
peaces be!/dkzk
i dig your stuff as well...
peaces be!/dkzk
