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Betrayed
Link to blink.
In a world that cannot see.
Tied together.
Tangibility wasting away.
Shells to walk the land.
Empty and hollow.
No way to feel for not a soul to see.
Broken and shattered no repair to be.
Slit me till I bleed.
Death upon me.
No heart to have.
Numb they say.
Dead already.
No tears to shed.
Empathy to be gone.
Killed by the lies.
Blinded by the knife in my back.
Blood to betray.
A daunting death from those who said they loved me.
Love to hurt me.
Love to make me cry.
Yank the knife from behind.
11/01/2019
In a world that cannot see.
Tied together.
Tangibility wasting away.
Shells to walk the land.
Empty and hollow.
No way to feel for not a soul to see.
Broken and shattered no repair to be.
Slit me till I bleed.
Death upon me.
No heart to have.
Numb they say.
Dead already.
No tears to shed.
Empathy to be gone.
Killed by the lies.
Blinded by the knife in my back.
Blood to betray.
A daunting death from those who said they loved me.
Love to hurt me.
Love to make me cry.
Yank the knife from behind.
11/01/2019
Published 1st Nov 2019
| Edited 2nd Nov 2019
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1st Nov 2019 8:40pm
I can't offer critique. I think you've written a very poignant and raw poem. There's no need to change anything.
2nd Nov 2019 3:53am
2nd Nov 2019 11:09pm
