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SENRYU - SHAMELESS
Spiritual bonding
not a down and dirty thing
sex education
not a down and dirty thing
sex education
Author's Note
Nothing more profound can be shared between two human beings. Is the experience somehow made better by thinking and speaking of it as naughty?
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Re. SENRYU - SHAMELESS
1st Nov 2019 7:38am
There's the thrill of rising excitements in thoughts of naughtiness, even if not naughty.
Its natural between two lovers, with a subtle hint of naughtiness for emotional thoughts thrown in.
Its natural between two lovers, with a subtle hint of naughtiness for emotional thoughts thrown in.
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Re: Re. SENRYU - SHAMELESS
1st Nov 2019 8:08am
You're right of course. Maybe I'm just in a perpetual state of naughtiness so I don't know the difference.
Re: Re. SENRYU - SHAMELESS
1st Nov 2019 9:04am
👍😁
Its those naughty thoughts that sit close behind all that is so lovingly romantic between two.
Afterall, lovingly romantic will always be the bread & butter to any jam filling applied
Its those naughty thoughts that sit close behind all that is so lovingly romantic between two.
Afterall, lovingly romantic will always be the bread & butter to any jam filling applied
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Re: Re. SENRYU - SHAMELESS
1st Nov 2019 3:00pm
That second paragraph, in your comment, is a wonderfully romantic, sensual, and wise.poem. 🌷💜
Your first paragraph prompts a poem in me. Thank you! 🙏😁
Your first paragraph prompts a poem in me. Thank you! 🙏😁
Re: Re. SENRYU - SHAMELESS
1st Nov 2019 5:13pm
Re. SENRYU - SHAMELESS
Re: Re. SENRYU - SHAMELESS
1st Nov 2019 3:03pm
Thank you so much, Sweet O! 🙏😁 You taught me my true voice in this piece. 🎶
Re. SENRYU - SHAMELESS
1st Nov 2019 4:43pm
I'm game! I mean, umm, I love this.
Truly though, I do. It's very sensual while telling the obvious truth. If people disagree, they're losers.🙄
Sorry, the collab thing hasn't been sparked. I think after "him" , my collab days are done. I get all sad.:(
Truly though, I do. It's very sensual while telling the obvious truth. If people disagree, they're losers.🙄
Sorry, the collab thing hasn't been sparked. I think after "him" , my collab days are done. I get all sad.:(
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Re: Re. SENRYU - SHAMELESS
I am truly sad that you are sad ☹️ My collabs are strictly NSA ,(not the gov. org) If that matters. Just for the pure fun of it. It may be what you need.
Re: Re. SENRYU - SHAMELESS
2nd Nov 2019 1:37am
Oh, I most definitely see the strictly fun part in neon letters. 😁 I've been pondering Willows new comp, but I'll ask about collabs being allowed. Her word choices always make things pop! I have things in my head & ultimately, a male voice could come in handy. Let me recover from this horrendous migraine & I'll fill ya in.;)
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Re. SENRYU - SHAMELESS
4th Nov 2019 3:17pm
Re: Re. SENRYU - SHAMELESS
4th Nov 2019 3:25pm
Merci, Mon Amie, dear Poet of the Week and my day. Maybe I should make it a forum question or comp, what do you think? Maybe too sensual? I always appreciate your words of encouragement and I thrill when I see a new Soledad poem in my list. You're awesome! 🙏💜😘
Re: Re. SENRYU - SHAMELESS
4th Nov 2019 3:28pm
You are most welcome my dear poet ... I think that would be a great question to pose ... it provokes a lot of thought ... at least in me anyways ...
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