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Another little masterpiece. You're fast becoming one of my favourite poets on this site. The 'bugs crawling out of the questions' and 'through the guts of cattle' metaphors were fantastic. One question though. Did you mean to spell 'God' with both an upper and a lower case g, or is that just a mistake?

thanks man.. I very much appreciate your support and comments.. its up lifting.. yes I write Ggod that way.. I tripped on mushrooms once and i saw Ggod.. he was like a yin yang or othello piece.. black and white on both sides.. so capital "G" for the "good" God.. and little "g" for the opposite evil "god" they are one in the same there is no God or satan but both in one entity.. same with us.. we have both dark and light in us.. and we function accordingly with the angel on one shoulder and devil on the other.. life is choices.. I try to keep my dark side written on paper rather than acting out anything I do.. and the good part of me is who you would meet if you knew nothing of my poetry and dark art.. I'm just a teddy bear on the outside.. inside I have my demons.. oh yes I do have my demons .. but don't we all

Only the idiotic don't have demons, and that's why I sometimes envy those blissful morons. Now that you've explained it for this novice, the Ggod thing is really quite clever; I suppose messing about with grammar really can lead to good stuff...

ha blissful idiots.. I know what you mean.. you ever see people with down syndrome.. they're some of the happiest people on earth.. always got that big shit eating grin on their faces.. not a care in the world.. us thinkers.. us artist.. us perfectionists worry and meticulously tear apart every damn thing trying to figure it all out and try to make it all fit.. the blissfully retarded got the right idea :D

of a poem nathan.

aw ty so much.. it was written like some of my others while I was in the mental hospital.. have had plenty of visits to those places ugh.. ;)