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occipital fracture
..trauma event..
..watches as..
..trauma event..
..opens central consciousness..
..watches..
..perception..
..a network of atomic hands..
..thought patterns of self..
..gnat-chaos..
..like the transparent fuzz..
..of a tv set..
..superimposing itself..
..on the metaphor of a theory..
..watches as..
..trauma event..
..opens central consciousness..
..watches..
..perception..
..a network of atomic hands..
..thought patterns of self..
..gnat-chaos..
..like the transparent fuzz..
..of a tv set..
..superimposing itself..
..on the metaphor of a theory..
Published 7th Jan 2010
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2010 10:44pm
One of your more psychological and image heavy poems, and none the worse for that. The ease and skill with which you convey the thought process of a man emerging from a coma after such a trauma is so immense, and the lines so realistic, that it makes me wonder if maybe you've suffered this yourself.
8th Jan 2010 00:37am
yes I was dropped on my head when I was 2 months old in the area of the skull bone called the occipital area.. the skull was fracture.. also this part of the brain that was pushed on slightly controls sight.. I have hallucinations that I theorize may have been caused by this event.. no coma.. no retardation.. but I believe this jolted something in me and my mind was wider open to thought and consciousness.. but that's just a theory..
