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One Lazy Haiku
on another day
we would stay in bed til noon
do what lovers do
we would stay in bed til noon
do what lovers do
Published 21st Aug 2019
Author's Note
I really had no desire to leave the bed this morning.
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- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
21st Aug 2019 9:47am
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21st Aug 2019 9:54am
Anonymous
- Edited 21st Oct 2019 5:45am
21st Aug 2019 11:07am
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21st Aug 2019 1:10pm
Thank you very much for noticing, HF. I could easily have gone for something more 'whiny', but this was indeed a very conscious choice of words. Keep it hopeful!
I appreciate your comment, as always.
Delanee.
I appreciate your comment, as always.
Delanee.
