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Missing love
She would lay there
Broken
Sad
Dead inside
Slit Wrists
Arms spread across the floor
Love walks in
Seeing this pain
Love forgets her and runs to another
She hurts love no more
And love no longer walks with her
She lives no longer
Her body a shell
For a dead soul
Broken
Sad
Dead inside
Slit Wrists
Arms spread across the floor
Love walks in
Seeing this pain
Love forgets her and runs to another
She hurts love no more
And love no longer walks with her
She lives no longer
Her body a shell
For a dead soul
Published 7th Jan 2010
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7th Jan 2010 7:43pm
Very vivid imagery here, I really liked your use of line breaks. Very effective as it emphasises how cut off she is.
7th Jan 2010 10:37pm
thanks... im a new poet so my poems might not be as well written as others
8th Jan 2010 7:56am
dont worry im not a pro at it either, but you do get alot of nice comments and i like this poem, not bad at all.
Nik
Nik
9th Jan 2010 3:45am
11th Jan 2010 2:59pm
13th Jan 2010 9:29pm
cool short poem.. says a lot.. I feel like Im just in a shell.. but I still have a heart.. I've seen people that seem just completely empty and destroyed from whatever life's done to them.. I hope you still have some of your heart left... hang in there and keep writing its powerful therapy
