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Left Broken
You left me broken,
Torn,
Alone.
You severed our bond,
Left me lying here.
I thought we were one,
But I was wrong.
So much pain,
So much hurt.
Is this love?
My heart aches.
My tears fall silently.
The pain you cause,
The sadness I feel.
My heart decieved me.
My heart is shattered,
It will never be whole.
Your love is my death.
Torn,
Alone.
You severed our bond,
Left me lying here.
I thought we were one,
But I was wrong.
So much pain,
So much hurt.
Is this love?
My heart aches.
My tears fall silently.
The pain you cause,
The sadness I feel.
My heart decieved me.
My heart is shattered,
It will never be whole.
Your love is my death.
Published 13th Dec 2011
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13th Dec 2011 10:36pm
The agony of heartbreak. If this a real experience, I hope you heal and true love comes your way.
Please make sure you involve yourself in discussions, poetry competitions, etc. You have a large family here on DU that will guide and help if you so desire.
Cheers.
Please make sure you involve yourself in discussions, poetry competitions, etc. You have a large family here on DU that will guide and help if you so desire.
Cheers.
14th Dec 2011 9:21pm
Thank you. Most of the things I write are from true experiences. Everytime I think that I've found love, my heart gets broken.
Anonymous
15th Dec 2011 9:34pm
I know I said it before but again...
Welcome!
I really like this piece, the emotions are described perfectly. I like the way you write too, its unique and acurate.
Like from me
Blue Skies
Al -x-
Welcome!
I really like this piece, the emotions are described perfectly. I like the way you write too, its unique and acurate.
Like from me
Blue Skies
Al -x-
