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Dreamland or hell?
With you I feel like I'm living in a dream
It's sweet like strawberries and cream
But it ended and I wanted to scream
The beginning......
It was a feeling I couldn't explain
My tears poured out like rain
But I wasn't in pain,
I just couldn't explain....
My heart drops when I see your face..
Cause you drug my through a fiery place
You'll never know what I had to say...
Cause our love just drifted away
It's sweet like strawberries and cream
But it ended and I wanted to scream
The beginning......
It was a feeling I couldn't explain
My tears poured out like rain
But I wasn't in pain,
I just couldn't explain....
My heart drops when I see your face..
Cause you drug my through a fiery place
You'll never know what I had to say...
Cause our love just drifted away
Published 9th Dec 2011
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9th Dec 2011 2:56pm
Being there before myself;that time when you brace yourself for a good start,only then you discover you are facing the beginning of the end......good work
9th Dec 2011 3:07pm
9th Dec 2011 3:26pm
9th Dec 2011 6:43pm
this reminds me of a situation i had in school,this chick was so in love with me so i gave her a chance,went well for awhile but then she became a pain,so we broke up.Anyways what i mean is you've got your whole life ahead of you,don't wilt over one dude.live life to the fullest, have fun exploring different avenues.
11th Dec 2011 3:41am
ur right jerry020. from my experience one dude can wilt you for a long time.
12th Dec 2011 2:38pm
12th Dec 2011 6:43pm
7th Feb 2012 5:58pm
Thank you to something beautiful and pure
Stems from the heart
And feeling good
Honest expression of feeling
Touch this
I feel
Feelings you
Gourmet
Sensitive
But the title of the poem
Divides the poem
Into two halves
Half goes with the pattern of the dream
And other
Is the vigilance
And dialogue between the two in fact
But overall a beautiful thing
I understand what you mean
And draw the image in the imagination
And it was possible prolongation few
To explain why the hell
Thank you
Stems from the heart
And feeling good
Honest expression of feeling
Touch this
I feel
Feelings you
Gourmet
Sensitive
But the title of the poem
Divides the poem
Into two halves
Half goes with the pattern of the dream
And other
Is the vigilance
And dialogue between the two in fact
But overall a beautiful thing
I understand what you mean
And draw the image in the imagination
And it was possible prolongation few
To explain why the hell
Thank you
7th Feb 2012 8:43pm
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20th Apr 2012 4:21am
thank you, i really like writing beautiful and sad at once. it's realistic. i'll be posting more soon.
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30th Apr 2012 4:31pm
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4th May 2012 2:46am
I enjoyed this. :)
