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left hand
i took my hand of protection away a long time ago..
i hope they stormed in and took you all over again..
(i’m glad they took your child from you)..
(i hope the bleeding's back)..
i hope they stormed in and took you all over again..
(i’m glad they took your child from you)..
(i hope the bleeding's back)..
Published 5th Jan 2010
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Anonymous
5th Jan 2010 8:01pm
I have a good idea, but I'm not sure I really want to comprehend the narrative related by these four stark lines. At any rate, it's another dark tour de force. Not as good as 'Metamorphosis', but still an absolute beauty.
5th Jan 2010 8:09pm
shit.. I misspelled the title.. it's suppose to be "left hand" I haven't figured out how to edit on here hm but no big deal really.. anyway I'm glad you dig it!1 I do see the similarity to metamorphosis.. they are both 4 lines and both very spiteful.. though they were for different girls.. I dont know which I like better.. cheers brother!!
Anonymous
5th Jan 2010 8:16pm
You can't edit on here at the moment. Just send the webmistress a private message and she'll change it for you. :]
5th Jan 2010 8:18pm
