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~Your Paradise~
I seem to lose myself as I gaze into your eyes.
The electricity in your touch-controls me.
Your long deep kisses-enslave me.
*I AM ALL YOURS*
I pray you make me cum.........
back down to earth knowing that this moment was & is real.
I want to be a part of your paradise.
I wish to be your fantasy.
Your love has captured me.
Take me.
Take me to your most intimate thoughts.
Let me.
Let me be the one that completes you.
Hold me.
Hold me tight as you make love to me, for I melt with your every thrust.
Feel me.
Feel me deep inside as you slip in & out of me.
Touch me.
Immerse my soul with your eternal love.
Experience me.
Taste my sweetness.
Penetrate my being.
My body burns for yours, hot passion I exude.
I can feel the adrenaline accelerating through.
I moan louder & louder as you hit me harder & harder.
High on your extacy, can't imagine not ever having my dose of your love....
Your mind....
Your body....
Your soul....
*I WANT IT ALL*
Your Paradise....take me there
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mmmmmmmmmmm
Anonymous
7th Dec 2011 2:31pm
very sensual - and erotic poem - well done - ^v^
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re: mmmmmmmmmmm
8th Dec 2011 6:46pm
re: Paradise
Anonymous
7th Dec 2011 5:25pm
cherry_blossom,
Love the picture of paradise you have painted here. Enjoyed,
tornado
Love the picture of paradise you have painted here. Enjoyed,
tornado
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re: re: Paradise
8th Dec 2011 6:49pm
Greasy fried chicken in your paradise? lol
Thank you...Glad you enjoyed as always :)
Thank you...Glad you enjoyed as always :)
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Anonymous
8th Dec 2011 7:14pm
you made paradise sound even better!
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re: ....
9th Dec 2011 10:54pm
BravoI
9th Dec 2011 12:21pm
Perfect the way you touch on the senses that can be clearly observed and yet extend to a contentment that goes beyond a physical presence. (My take anyway)
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re: BravoI
9th Dec 2011 10:57pm
:-)
Anonymous
9th Dec 2011 7:32pm
You did so well sharing your paradise that I almost forgot what mine looked AND felt like ;)
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re: :-)
9th Dec 2011 10:59pm
lol thank you....looking forward to your customized version of your paradise ;)
dayum.. wow
13th Jan 2012 10:17pm
re: dayum.. wow
13th Jan 2012 10:53pm
You're sweet! :)
Thanks for your kind words.
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
Thanks for your kind words.
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
re: re: dayum.. wow
18th Jan 2012 6:54pm
if you could read my poem entitled "a letter to my special friend" id appreciate yur thoughts on this and other poems i wrote.
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amazingthis is outstanding...love it!!
20th Jan 2012 00:29am
re: amazingthis is outstanding...love it!!
20th Jan 2012 00:57am
Re: ~Your Paradise~
25th Apr 2013 2:19pm
Wow, if your guy could reply I'm sure he'd say YOU were paradise!! lol. Beautiful , loving, super sexy n hott ink lady! :)
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re: Re: ~Your Paradise~
2nd Jun 2015 2:20pm
Re: ~Your Paradise~
25th May 2015 11:33pm
An explosively sensual piece of erotic verse! Your passion bleeds from the screen and clouds my vision in cherry red mist... jj
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re: Re: ~Your Paradise~
26th May 2015 00:27am
re: re: Re: ~Your Paradise~
2nd Jun 2015 2:21pm
thank you!! Just bleeding passion.....
Your Cherry Blossom is perfect as is!😊
Your Cherry Blossom is perfect as is!😊
re: re: re: Re: ~Your Paradise~
2nd Jun 2015 6:31pm
I couldn't help myself, I did add a line, or was it two, based on that comment. See if you can find it... lol
jj
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