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I always write
when emotions run high
but I just can't do it
I have hit a wall
I can't seem to get over
crawling under not an option
my emotion now frustration
making it more daunting
so I'm going to camp right here
for the time being
if you happen by
and have the time
come share a beer
come share your mind
advice always welcome
but conversation is fine
when emotions run high
but I just can't do it
I have hit a wall
I can't seem to get over
crawling under not an option
my emotion now frustration
making it more daunting
so I'm going to camp right here
for the time being
if you happen by
and have the time
come share a beer
come share your mind
advice always welcome
but conversation is fine
Published 27th May 2019
Author's Note
I needed to write something. So in desperation I wrote about not being able to write! Yes, I know. I am crazy!
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27th May 2019 1:23am
It's actually a great start! How about using it as a spring board. Not to rewrite the poem necessarily, but to find a trigger that is lingering under the blank thought.
"I always write ...(about...now try the opposite)
when emotions run high (i find myself..)
but I just can't do it (because...what are you wanting to do instead?)
I have hit a wall (and it feels like...)
I can't seem to get over (how high is the wall?)
crawling under not an option (why not?)
my emotion now frustration (what are you really thinking about?)
making it more daunting
so I'm going to camp right here (where are you?)
for the time being
if you happen by
and have the time
come share a beer
come share your mind
advice always welcome
but conversation is fine"
"I always write ...(about...now try the opposite)
when emotions run high (i find myself..)
but I just can't do it (because...what are you wanting to do instead?)
I have hit a wall (and it feels like...)
I can't seem to get over (how high is the wall?)
crawling under not an option (why not?)
my emotion now frustration (what are you really thinking about?)
making it more daunting
so I'm going to camp right here (where are you?)
for the time being
if you happen by
and have the time
come share a beer
come share your mind
advice always welcome
but conversation is fine"
Anonymous
27th May 2019 3:35pm
I call it
``poetic writer`s block``
it happens.
But regard`less
of the emotion, Lady,
I`d say
you did write a poem!
~Devlin
27th May 2019 9:28pm
Thanks Devlin! Perfect proof that this website supports even when the writings shit, lol! We all have our moments and this is one of mine. None the less thank you beautiful for commmenting!
Anonymous
27th May 2019 11:58pm
anytime, Lady M🌹
