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I like the fast timing and rythmn you have here, its almost like being in a accident. That love that comes and goes at racing speeds. Which makes it a unique love poem. I dont understand the title. How does the furniture fit in? Also I think reading your piece with an editing eye will do wonders, look for things like. . . Should this word start with a cap or lower case letter? Repetitive words where you dont need them and that type of thing. I do like how its not just another cliche love poem and how you dont shove some kind of 'Im hurt, feel sorry for me' blurb down our throats. So yes, its a definate like from me! Blue Skies to you Al - x -

Thank you, And yes it does, and the title... I think i should change that but i also think it would make people wonder when they read it. I do repeat words purposly tho. But thankyou for your honesty :)