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Suicide
stripping a suicide from memories sharp
gouging wounds trenches to drain the life
of mind away--thoughts drip rapidly into
pools of doubt, refracting hope's reflection to
a redundant angle, aimless and wandering until
a finite point is reached, isolated in a devouring shadow,
a spark with nothing to ignite
gouging wounds trenches to drain the life
of mind away--thoughts drip rapidly into
pools of doubt, refracting hope's reflection to
a redundant angle, aimless and wandering until
a finite point is reached, isolated in a devouring shadow,
a spark with nothing to ignite
Published 30th Nov 2011
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2nd Dec 2011 1:58am
There doesn't have to be a huge epic about suicide, and you have put it into a simplistic form that is very indepth.
