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On an Elevator

first a look
and then a feeling
the smell of you
is so appealing

my heart beats fast
I know you're leaving
I am touched
beyond conceiving

rising up
the lift arriving
doors are opened
so alive in

this moment
our first meeting
I watch you walk
in time so fleeting

now I'm here
and I'm recalling
believing you are
also falling

speculating
hoping too
that I'll be
looking out for you
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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