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Red
It feels so good
The pain sears
It feels so good
My eyes don't even tear
It feels so good
All these 13 years
I could just slice a tear
right here
on my arm
And for a minute,
I have no fears
And for a minute,
I'm actually here
And for a minute,
I forget it all
I forget to fall
I forget to scream
Sounds like sleep
so sweet
And the color
Oh, the vibrancy
Can red be more beautiful?
Can it be more real?
Can it be more real than how I feel?
The pain sears
It feels so good
My eyes don't even tear
It feels so good
All these 13 years
I could just slice a tear
right here
on my arm
And for a minute,
I have no fears
And for a minute,
I'm actually here
And for a minute,
I forget it all
I forget to fall
I forget to scream
Sounds like sleep
so sweet
And the color
Oh, the vibrancy
Can red be more beautiful?
Can it be more real?
Can it be more real than how I feel?
Published 23rd Nov 2011
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23rd Nov 2011 11:53pm
Great write. I have been there and back again. No pain in the physical cut. The emotional cut is this deepest. Their is no eat me drink me annidote for that but revenge.
28th Nov 2011 2:59pm
Where I come from, we do this, and cook it, makes for excellent gravy.
I got hungry just reading this.
I got hungry just reading this.
28th Nov 2011 3:45pm
