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Bleeding Eyes
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Bleeding Eyes
A red sunset
burns
through shrouds of cloud.
Bleeding sun rays
trickle
in boiled waves of sea.
Written by
gothicsurrealism
(Daniel Long)
Published
8th Feb 2019
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Dark short poems/quotes
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www.gothicsurrealism.com
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#anger
#depression
#sadness
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Re. Bleeding Eyes
Wordhobo
(Word Hobo)
9th Feb 2019 11:48pm
Fiery imagery. Love the sharp contrasting emphasis between "burn". & " trickle". Great piece...
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Re. Bleeding Eyes
Thedeadinme
10th Feb 2019 1:20am
Good read
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Re. Bleeding Eyes
Anemone
10th Feb 2019 1:44pm
Yes, it's the imagery I like too.
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