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letter to God iii
at the end of the tunnel..
i will thank you for nothing..
don't open the gates..
i will walk through them..
i will knock you off your thrown..
i will stand over you..
i will tear a hole in your throat..
and fuck you there to violate the voice of god..
till there is silence..
i will leave my seed in your neck..
i will piss in your corpse and answer no further questions..
i will thank you for nothing..
don't open the gates..
i will walk through them..
i will knock you off your thrown..
i will stand over you..
i will tear a hole in your throat..
and fuck you there to violate the voice of god..
till there is silence..
i will leave my seed in your neck..
i will piss in your corpse and answer no further questions..
Published 29th Dec 2009
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Anonymous
29th Dec 2009 7:51pm
Now this is rageful atheism! The anger and the brutality startles once more, and better still it is related in true poetic fashion. I think you meant "throne" instead of "thrown", but that's a piddling complaint. Awesome piece.
29th Dec 2009 7:56pm
30th Dec 2009 00:09am
'at the end of the tunnel..
i will thank you for nothing..'
Because everything you have accomplished is yours. No need to give the credit to some uncaring bastard.
A great read :-)
i will thank you for nothing..'
Because everything you have accomplished is yours. No need to give the credit to some uncaring bastard.
A great read :-)
30th Dec 2009 00:43am
thanks brother.. this band pig destroyer that I like has a lyric that says "a loving God is still a master" if you ever read the bible like the old testament God sure was an arrogant angry spiteful vengeful fucker ;)
30th Dec 2009 5:19am
But at least he interacted with his people, giving them more than 'faith'.
I mean I would convert in a second if there was solid proof god is real, and I hate the delusion as much as you seem to.
I mean I would convert in a second if there was solid proof god is real, and I hate the delusion as much as you seem to.
30th Dec 2009 5:41am
believe half of what you see and none of what you hear.
I hate hope. delusions are a part of that. hope usually leads to disappointment.. I have little faith in anything here
I hate hope. delusions are a part of that. hope usually leads to disappointment.. I have little faith in anything here
