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Bring Me Up
he awakes
an erected obelisk
obsidian hued
tangoed with earth tones
veined..strained
the anthropology of man
symbolized as
antiquity soothsayed
zombied inside
the gulag that exists as
the human condition
awaiting
heaven's nurturer
blessed with divine sight
able to peer beyond
this throbbing thickened visage
and get to the
root of the matter
acknowledging
the needs of his physicality
and the sojourning spirited one
encased within the human condition
contrasting convictions
and philosophies
'tis a tale of man at war
she innerstands
the sacred conduit
that snakes before her eyes
the reason why it
magnetizes...magnifies
conjuring her ever lingering lust
her haunting obsession
her reptilian mind
but yet
her Queen reigns supreme
as she strokes his shaft
in a textured genuineness and sensuality
calling down energies
from the Crown of his nobility
she opens wide her mouth
and sucks not just the hardened
extension of her restless man
but his magnificence his principles
and his subtleties
she deep throats him with
a stated purpose
taking the full length of him
feeling the raw strength of him
thrusting upward
into her waiting esophagus
prepared to serve
as the sarcophagus for his
arching archaeology
loving the entire act of it
satiating her deepest desires while
loving her man even more
making it all the more meaningful
all the more beautiful
to him and her
to feel
his loins lurch in submission
and his spirit vibrate hard
under the guidance of her palms
deep inside her mouth
absorbing his story as he cums
etching his soul
as he stretches down her throat
longing to lose himself
in the transparency of in her intentions
and ooze out his future
easing his intuition with
each pelvic thrust
reveling in how
she brings up his bottled genie
enduring him as he throttles
thrashes..splashes
against the roof of her mouth
soaking her tongue
feeding her hunger
as she nurtures him properly
giving him the space to
place his all of his lust and his trust
beneath the heaving bust
of a woman
who truly gets the entirety
of the man laying
before her
the man that he is
the man that
she loves
Published 20th Nov 2018
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Ooh! A penile poem - yay! Wonderful language. Not sure you need the final verse - but I can understand the tenderness that perhaps led you to include it
Anonymous
20th Nov 2018 12:20pm
Killed it bro !! Absolutely Killed it !!
This made my mouth water. So sensual so sexy. There is real love in this poem! Either you for her or her for you. BRAVO!! A fav!
she opens wide her mouth
and sucks not just the hardened
extension of her restless man
but his magnificence his principles
and his subtleties
she opens wide her mouth
and sucks not just the hardened
extension of her restless man
but his magnificence his principles
and his subtleties
Anonymous
22nd Nov 2018 2:11am
Wow, so beautifully erotic
