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Desperation

Biting winds, bitter cold
diesel fumes and food thats old
This si what i wasn't told
Look up on the evening sky, the temperature drop and i want to die
So i toss and turn, try to sleep only to find dangeraus fumes, they do creep
Pop the hatch in a hurry, only to meet a blizzards flurry
So get back in and hold my breath
hope the smell wont warrent death
I pass out..
is this the end?
Only for the day to start again..
Written by scott95
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Author's Note
This poem is unfortunately based on a recent life even that almost cost me everything.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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