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Love's Banquet
To our acquisition, twined tongues and the assemblage of our lips; a sweet prelude would they be. Of your tenement to dawn; I invite of you to my loves calescent conclave. In our requited melody as two entities cohere - would we sing. Our resonance to heaven above; Love is an angel whose name is Lust, echoed are our convictions. Derived and exalted; in pleasure shall we give without obstruction. In our resplendent gaiety; every fiber of self given as disburdened are
our beings. Where there is repose and reverence without limitations, have we a seat at Love's banquet.
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our beings. Where there is repose and reverence without limitations, have we a seat at Love's banquet.
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Published 19th Nov 2018
| Edited 27th Jan 2019
Author's Note
Although a different play on words and in "Pandora language", this was inspired by the words and thoughts of my dear friend and kindred spirit, Juvenalis66. Thank you, you're a beautiful soul who's inspired me so very much.
Also, the song attached to his piece with a different play on it as well...
https://youtu.be/53GrfT-cwEo
Also, the song attached to his piece with a different play on it as well...
https://youtu.be/53GrfT-cwEo
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Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 10:12am
Thank you my sweet friend. For everything. This is beautiful and heartfelt. I believe in the union of souls beyond the barriers of time, distance or language and here you state it so beautifully.
"Derived and exalted; in pleasure shall we give without obstruction. In our resplendent gaiety; every fiber of self given as disburdened are
our beings. Where there is repose and reverence without limitations, have we a seat at Love's banquet".
Truly, you've caught the centre of my thoughts. Thank you for the honour you have given me. But this is beautifully your child. Hugs J
"Derived and exalted; in pleasure shall we give without obstruction. In our resplendent gaiety; every fiber of self given as disburdened are
our beings. Where there is repose and reverence without limitations, have we a seat at Love's banquet".
Truly, you've caught the centre of my thoughts. Thank you for the honour you have given me. But this is beautifully your child. Hugs J
Thank you and you're welcome. I was hoping to get somewhere close to your thoughts with a different spin. Because of the song , I switched up the words from lust [yours] to love and the other reference as well. I'm so very glad you enjoyed it. Just tried to convey your thoughts the best I could.
Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 1:15pm
<3
19th Nov 2018 2:44pm
Brava Pandora! I love the depth of this passage:
"...every fiber of self given as disburdened are
our beings. Where there is repose and reverence without limitations..."
"...every fiber of self given as disburdened are
our beings. Where there is repose and reverence without limitations..."
19th Nov 2018 8:01pm
Thank you, I'm glad you found it so. The credit goes to sweet Juvenalis66, as I tried a take on his thoughts.
19th Nov 2018 3:25pm
lyrically luscious...and I learnt a new word 'calescent'...love learning new words...
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Anonymous
- Edited 28th Dec 2018 6:48pm
19th Nov 2018 4:27pm
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19th Nov 2018 8:06pm
Thank you. It's an honor I treasure. I'm so glad to see you back as well, my old friend.
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Dec 2018 6:48pm
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25th Nov 2018 2:40am
Thank you. You already know I love yours. I get excited each time I see you back and then..poof! You're gone!
Anonymous
19th Nov 2018 9:47pm
Pandora.. beautiful, and brilliant ink.. really dig this line.. " Love is an angel who's name is Lust" it just resonates with me.. you great skills, my lady.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
19th Nov 2018 11:13pm
Thank you. I'm glad you did. It was truly brought to me by the poem "Banquet of Lust" by Juvenalis66. He had attached the song" Because the Night" along with it and that reference was made.
