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Lake Shore
My back still feels
her hands gliding 'round
My neck still aches
to feel her hot breath blow
My hands still remember
every curve of her body
My eyes still see
the way that she would glow
My lips still burn
from the soft moonlit kisses
My heart still yearns
for her arms around Me tight
My ears still tingle
from the moans softly whispered
My mind still lingers
by the lakeshore late at night
her hands gliding 'round
My neck still aches
to feel her hot breath blow
My hands still remember
every curve of her body
My eyes still see
the way that she would glow
My lips still burn
from the soft moonlit kisses
My heart still yearns
for her arms around Me tight
My ears still tingle
from the moans softly whispered
My mind still lingers
by the lakeshore late at night
Published 19th Nov 2018
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19th Nov 2018 2:11am
You, my dear have a gift of artistry too. I envision the that once was and sadness of what is, all tied up with the romance. Great work!
19th Nov 2018 4:41am
You are very sweet my dear...believe it is about a love lost when I was 19...My first love...we had been dating since Junior High...she will always have a piece of my heart...she inspired me to be romantic passionate and kind...I was what they call a " bab boy "
She say something special in me no one not even myself ever saw...wow well I just let the wolf out of the woods now...better stop while I still ahead...🐺💋
She say something special in me no one not even myself ever saw...wow well I just let the wolf out of the woods now...better stop while I still ahead...🐺💋
19th Nov 2018 6:29am
You're a poet, therefore all passion is revealed somehow. Plus, aren't we all nostalgic and sentimental for the most part? I never turn down a love story so write away. I'm sure she's out there thinking of you as well my friend;)
19th Nov 2018 7:02am
Thank you my dear you are very sweet...I would hope so that people are nostalgic...if she is thinking of me will be from heaven up high...🐺🐺
19th Nov 2018 11:07pm
19th Nov 2018 11:20pm
Don't be sad for me please...she was riddled with cancer...lot of pain...she's in a better place...🐺
