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My best friend
He's my best friend
he's always there for me
he was there when I cired
he made me smile tho my heart was breaking
he makes me feel amazing
hes my sun of sunshine tho were both so gloomy
he always hugs me and it makes me melt
he makes me feel wanted when I feel lost
he makes me wanna smile when I wanted to cry
hes got my heart unlocked
so I let him in
now he will forever be with me as my best friend <3
he's always there for me
he was there when I cired
he made me smile tho my heart was breaking
he makes me feel amazing
hes my sun of sunshine tho were both so gloomy
he always hugs me and it makes me melt
he makes me feel wanted when I feel lost
he makes me wanna smile when I wanted to cry
hes got my heart unlocked
so I let him in
now he will forever be with me as my best friend <3
Published 3rd Nov 2011
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Anonymous
19th Mar 2012 00:49am
The first time I read the poem I thought you were writing about a really nice dog....as my late dog was exactly like that....
Then I realized that maybe it was something else...a person?????
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SO I LET HIM IN
NOW HE WILL FOREVER BE WITH ME AS MY BEST FRIEND
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Still reads like a poem to a really good dog
BUT I LIKED IT
Then I realized that maybe it was something else...a person?????
**************************************************
SO I LET HIM IN
NOW HE WILL FOREVER BE WITH ME AS MY BEST FRIEND
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Still reads like a poem to a really good dog
BUT I LIKED IT
22nd May 2012 00:21am
