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MAGNET BLOCKS
Let me in
I say to you
In my head
Let me in
You say to me
Thru the door
We are so close
To being
So close
Attract
And repel
Like magnet blocks
I say to you
In my head
Let me in
You say to me
Thru the door
We are so close
To being
So close
Attract
And repel
Like magnet blocks
Published 2nd Oct 2018
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2nd Oct 2018 1:11pm
I enjoy how this can be applied to many different situations. The first time reading it triggered a couple having problems. As I read it again and again new situations emerged.
Well done SatInUGal!
Well done SatInUGal!
2nd Oct 2018 5:12pm
2nd Oct 2018 2:40pm
reminded me of that scary movie let me in which has nothing to do with this.....
2nd Oct 2018 5:14pm
I haven't seen that, but absolutely ADORE the Swedish original, Let the Right One In
2nd Oct 2018 3:00pm
2nd Oct 2018 5:14pm
