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overdose i
blasted out of my fucking head
suffocating under
the weight of your influence
engulf this mortal waste
300 phamaceuticals
I'll be dead in 20 minutes
suffocating under
the weight of your influence
engulf this mortal waste
300 phamaceuticals
I'll be dead in 20 minutes
Published 27th Dec 2009
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11th Jan 2010 8:22pm
11th Jan 2010 9:54pm
oh thanks so much doll.. I like your poems too.. definitely check out more of my stuff if you like dark dark stuff.. yeah suicide is a common subject in my poems.. cheers hun!
Anonymous
14th Jan 2010 3:20am
Excellent evocation of a moment. Suicide perfectly compressed into a few short lines. Especially like "engulf this mortal waste".
14th Jan 2010 3:27am
actually originally i was going to say engulf these mortal wounds but I thought about if for a minute or two saying to myself where did i hear that before and i listened to a pig destroyer song and looked up the lyrics and sure enough they had the words mortal wounds in one of their verses so i changed it to mortal waste
