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Not Petfect
I'm not perfect,
Nowhere close,
And honestly,
I think I may be slipping
A little more than I should;
Cause I have needs,
That only you can meet-
But you can't seem
To make the time,
So, I make do-
The best way I know how-
By slowly melting you down.
Nowhere close,
And honestly,
I think I may be slipping
A little more than I should;
Cause I have needs,
That only you can meet-
But you can't seem
To make the time,
So, I make do-
The best way I know how-
By slowly melting you down.
Published 19th Oct 2011
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19th Oct 2011 3:08pm
This poem is good, however it can be better. I like it but I feel it needs more than what you wrote.
19th Oct 2011 11:54pm
