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forever
Even when I was at my darkest
You were my shining light
We are the other's
forever...
You were my shining light
We are the other's
forever...
Published 11th Jun 2018
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29th Jun 2018 1:30am
This is a beautifully heartfelt poem. It's bound to give even a little bit of hope to those who are struggling.
Nicely done!
Nicely done!
30th Jun 2018 1:53pm
2nd Jul 2018 00:21am
Very nice.
Just like a movie your short poem has enveloping FXs (special effects).
Just like a movie your short poem has enveloping FXs (special effects).
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8th Jul 2018 2:02am
15th Jul 2018 2:01am
Made me cry and slightly jealous - such is Life and Love :-(((
Awesome power in so few words :-))))
Awesome power in so few words :-))))
15th Jul 2018 4:32am
Aw! You are the sweetest! I cry all the time on here reading everyones poetry!
I am a very lucky gal. I have the love of thee greatest man and 2 beautiful kids. Nothing better, not even the demons can win in that. <3
I am a very lucky gal. I have the love of thee greatest man and 2 beautiful kids. Nothing better, not even the demons can win in that. <3
