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Fuck...Fuck...Fuck...
AAaaggghhh!
Tried to submit a poem
But away it went
Gone
I don't even know
What to do
Clicked the button
Then there it went
Appreared
The poetry worm
With that squiggly thing above its head
Saying it failed to submit
And I'm a...
....
blank.
Godammnit technology
You got me again...
man...
I thought it was good too
But now
Here I write
A vent-of a poem
That I think is kinda shitty
But ohwell
A poem
Tried to submit a poem
But away it went
Gone
I don't even know
What to do
Clicked the button
Then there it went
Appreared
The poetry worm
With that squiggly thing above its head
Saying it failed to submit
And I'm a...
....
blank.
Godammnit technology
You got me again...
man...
I thought it was good too
But now
Here I write
A vent-of a poem
That I think is kinda shitty
But ohwell
A poem
Published 7th May 2018
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8th May 2018 2:46am
Ouuuuhhhhh .. I meant to write a comment .
Sham bam .. damn. .. this is pretty cool
Kind of ironic . <3
Sham bam .. damn. .. this is pretty cool
Kind of ironic . <3
8th May 2018 3:26am
Thanks ehehe....
It kinda is lol
I was working a whole different poem but I got so mad heh.
BA-BAM!
<3
It kinda is lol
I was working a whole different poem but I got so mad heh.
BA-BAM!
<3
8th May 2018 3:39am
Good gawd almighty, I usually start with paper by the time I'm done rearranging the official original is now on line, one itti bitty bit of nothing much and poof gone ohhh boy do I get pissed so frickin pissed. Most definitely I can relate. Love that it's not only me hate that you go through the same exact thing. Sometimes I wish that worm would just inch inch inch on down the road Respectfully,
Survivor 📝
Survivor 📝
9th May 2018 3:34am
