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20th Apr 2018 5:41pm
Woah...got me moistened with this one! Pretty intensely sweet writing here...
20th Apr 2018 5:43pm
20th Apr 2018 5:48pm
You are. Inspires me to want to return the favor, writing about it from the other side!!
20th Apr 2018 5:52pm
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20th Apr 2018 7:17pm
Oh my dark sweet Cacao ... moistening is ... so right. Love the irregular stanza length like the ragged breathing. A little rhyme here and there to tickle my ear ... beautiful visuals ... sweet erotica, not crass or porny. Killer couplet at the end ... roll me over ... I am flushed ... sweaty ... and forever ... yours
20th Apr 2018 7:39pm
