Fire and Ice

❤️ the varying stanza lengths and flow of this. Pulled me in and kept me there

I’m impressed! I see your name first in most all my reviews! :)

You are a very talented writer and when I get positive feedback from one I consider powerful in their own right, I’m honored!

Thank you LDF

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Justafan of yours

Why thank you. I plan to check out all of your poetry. I really like your range and versatility. You have a sincerity that rings true. Your kind words mean a lot ... I still get nervous when I post a poem ... I know silly poetess.

I also post on another site which has helped me tremendously!

I’m moving some of my work here!

It’s always a tense moment to allow others to read your work!

M

This was pretty nicely done, felt traces of intensity, n passion.

Thank u for giving my work a portion of your time!

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Justafan

fire melts ice...which puts out fire ..an elemental read...in astrology there are always mitigating influences...well done

I appreciate you reading and leaving a nice review :)

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Justafan

Fan, I can picture so well the interactions descrikbed in this stanza:

"When we come together
In anger
Words sear the heart
Or
Freeze the mind "

Thrilling piece! Brava!

Ahh a new name in my reviews, I love meeting new writers! I’m new to this site but I will definitely return the favor now and read something of yours :)

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Justafan

Welcome! I can tell you will be a talented asset to the site. Read my stuff only if you want to...I realize it's not appealing to everybody. Cheers!

I would like to offer you a different perspective on this poem , my friend ;

In *gematria* where letters have number values , thus words do , the
phrase : "Fire And Ice Together" , has a value of 455 ;

Interestingly , "Incarnation" = 455 , yet , "I Am Initiation And Renewal" = 454
is as well applicable , and one more for now :

Fire And Ice Together = 455 = Flame Of Love

As far as your poem itself...

This speaks strongly to me :

"Your touch
Your kiss
Your hands
The matches
That set our
Love ablaze"

Well spoken and penned !

so beautiful , so romantic .. well done .. i enjoyed reading this ..brilliant idea .. fire and ice..

Oh how I love seeing a new name in my reviews :)

Thank you very much 🌹

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Justafan