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MIRROR
I am oh so lonely,
said the lonely man
to his friend . . .
in the mirror
don’t cry,
said the lonely man
to his friend . . .
in the mirror
said the lonely man
to his friend . . .
in the mirror
don’t cry,
said the lonely man
to his friend . . .
in the mirror
Written by
RWCJR
(RWCJR Robert)
Published 4th Apr 2018
| Edited 14th Apr 2018
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Anonymous
- Edited 11th Feb 2021 11:45am
4th Apr 2018 3:00am
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4th Apr 2018 3:32am
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14th Apr 2018 4:26am
I just saw this . I truly thank you ! For your acknowledging me , and your encouragement !
Anonymous
- Edited 26th May 2018 6:48pm
4th Apr 2018 4:10am
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I don’t think I do ? The friend in the mirror is me , there is no one else involved , well except for the monster called loneliness
Anonymous
- Edited 26th May 2018 6:48pm
4th Apr 2018 1:32pm
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Re: Re. ADRIFT
4th Apr 2018 4:30pm
Ah excellent thinking ! It did not occur to me . See how one thinks when they are a seasoned poet like yourself ! Thanks
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- Edited 26th May 2018 6:48pm
4th Apr 2018 6:08pm
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Re. ADRIFT
Anonymous
4th Apr 2018 4:54pm
Hey Robert.........this is brilliant........ very thought provoking and inspiring........to look within the mirror of your soul can be so enlightning.......to see tears only felt and seen by you.......I’ve learned thru the years to smile at me........to luv me and not hate what I see........enjoyed this much.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. ADRIFT
4th Apr 2018 5:07pm
Thank you flowergirl ! Very much !
Those words just came to me last night , when I came home again , to an empty house . One would think that I would be used to it by now LOL .
Those words just came to me last night , when I came home again , to an empty house . One would think that I would be used to it by now LOL .
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Anonymous
4th Apr 2018 5:12pm
Hey Robert........your house might be empty but your heart and soul aren’t.......I sense words within you that need to escape........keep letting them inspire your creativeness........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. ADRIFT
14th Apr 2018 4:22am
Wow , I just saw this too . I will try , with such encouraging words from you ! And others . That was a very uplifting thought to say to me