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Boogie Man (a quintain)
Child's breath
Hidden closet
Betraying vain attempts
To be to him invisible
See-through.
Hidden closet
Betraying vain attempts
To be to him invisible
See-through.
Published 3rd Apr 2018
| Edited 27th Jun 2020
Author's Note
Quintain form competition. 5 lines: 2-4-6-8-2 syllables each. No rhyming.
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16th Apr 2018 5:18pm
This sounds like a total nightmare, terrifying. The words barely say it but maybe they don't need to.
6th Jul 2018 7:16am
Definitely bare... the quintain style forces brevity, which is such a fun (and hard) challenge to play around with. Thanks for stopping in!
