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I'm workin' on it
Words travel out upon the gravel
of an unfinished road
courting a judge with a grudge
unraveling a final spinal nudge
in the courting court room
telling me where I stand and sit
with a final slam of the gavel
and a final sentence sent from the innocent
sent to repent in a world full of shit
"Fuck you! I'm workin' on it!"
of an unfinished road
courting a judge with a grudge
unraveling a final spinal nudge
in the courting court room
telling me where I stand and sit
with a final slam of the gavel
and a final sentence sent from the innocent
sent to repent in a world full of shit
"Fuck you! I'm workin' on it!"
Published 31st Mar 2018
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1st Apr 2018 5:19am
amazing..
the expression, how brilliantly it is delivered
that it does deliver the powerful emotion so well
that it is felt
second... it's a nor brainer, fits perfect- the ram-rage poetry, prime example.
effective ink dear brother!
the expression, how brilliantly it is delivered
that it does deliver the powerful emotion so well
that it is felt
second... it's a nor brainer, fits perfect- the ram-rage poetry, prime example.
effective ink dear brother!
1st Apr 2018 7:43pm
8th Apr 2018 7:37am
