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Eternity Minus A Long Time
Never, always, comes
and it, always, comes with an
expiration date...
and it, always, comes with an
expiration date...
Published 29th Mar 2018
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29th Mar 2018 4:26pm
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30th Mar 2018 1:25pm
loving the insights..but more loving your artistry with words in its brevity, the title..
made me rethink of "never"& "always" in its connotations..liked the masterly repititive use of 'always, comes'
and what the commas have done here..
adoring..write more such gems!
made me rethink of "never"& "always" in its connotations..liked the masterly repititive use of 'always, comes'
and what the commas have done here..
adoring..write more such gems!
30th Mar 2018 6:18pm
I'm extremely grateful to you for noticing my careful application of commas in the little poem.
