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Fall Away
Fall away like a feather a off a wing
Like a pedal from a rose
Like a Samara off a maple tree
Fall away like a silent tear
Like a hand letting go
Like the hair I once brushed from your cheek.
Slowly, gracefully
if you must go
Like a pedal from a rose
Like a Samara off a maple tree
Fall away like a silent tear
Like a hand letting go
Like the hair I once brushed from your cheek.
Slowly, gracefully
if you must go
Published 12th Mar 2018
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12th Mar 2018 6:34pm
Cruz, this is well painted, beautiful melancholy. I have always had a hard time letting go and to propose such a peaceful transition is a wonderful thing. I love the metaphors. Brava!
12th Mar 2018 7:51pm
🤗 I believe we should try our best to resolve things peacefully in all we do.
12th Mar 2018 7:54pm
Anonymous
12th Mar 2018 6:42pm
So elegant
Short and sweet ....each if those word count...
Very well put
Autumn
Short and sweet ....each if those word count...
Very well put
Autumn
12th Mar 2018 7:49pm
13th Mar 2018 1:45pm
so beautiful .. i love how you have mentioned a maple tree and a birds wing .. lovely
