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'4-Sight...'
Though tacit memories
flood the lenses' view
of journeys by gone...
Blurring' in shutter-sped clips
the sea, sits still...
As it's unwaivering
in it's determined calm
to hold steady to it's secrets
long buried...
like an 'amnesiac crutch'
forebadin' the brilliance of light...
flood the lenses' view
of journeys by gone...
Blurring' in shutter-sped clips
the sea, sits still...
As it's unwaivering
in it's determined calm
to hold steady to it's secrets
long buried...
like an 'amnesiac crutch'
forebadin' the brilliance of light...
Author's Note
This is the first in series of collaborations
my daughter n I are doing...hope you enjoy :)
my daughter n I are doing...hope you enjoy :)
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Anonymous
11th Mar 2018 2:19am
What a wonderful experience to share with your daughter. I enjoyed this piece. Looking forward to seeing more :-)
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11th Mar 2018 2:50am
Yea, for her part it's the images as in above (she's deeply into photography) n I'm writin' to her
photos... Thank u so much my friend :)
photos... Thank u so much my friend :)
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11th Mar 2018 2:42am
a beautiful journey to be shared indeed
filled with mystic gems
such as this here
'As it's unwavering
in it's determined calm
to hold steady to it's secrets
long buried... '
some deep innerstanding manifested here
along with enjoying the artistry i have so much
respect and admiration for this vibe
filled with mystic gems
such as this here
'As it's unwavering
in it's determined calm
to hold steady to it's secrets
long buried... '
some deep innerstanding manifested here
along with enjoying the artistry i have so much
respect and admiration for this vibe
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11th Mar 2018 3:51am
Thanks bro. my daughter takes amazing pics. N I suggested to her we collab. On our two loves, n this is the result of the first collab. Glad it was enjoyed by you n thank u much... :)
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11th Mar 2018 3:45am
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11th Mar 2018 4:11am
Truly did enjoy this. Not just for the obvious, but the beauty of intertwining family talent.
Well done you two.
Well done you two.
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11th Mar 2018 12:24pm
Thank you, there's actually a version of this pic. That's much better, but this is the one I used from my phone becuz my child is very slow at givin me any of her photos lol... Appreciate you my dear lady... :)
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11th Mar 2018 4:42pm
Well of course she is, ever mindful of sparing you the anguish of parental worry, keeping your best interests in mind. lol.
To have such a thoughtful child is but a joy to behold.
To have such a thoughtful child is but a joy to behold.
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11th Mar 2018 4:47pm
Thats a very generous comment, n I'm truly grateful...appreciate your support always :)
Re. '4-Sight...'
11th Mar 2018 11:45am
Well done, you two! Such a beautiful tribute to the sea ... makes me long to feel its salty embrace!
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11th Mar 2018 5:12pm
If that Sea could speak, I'm sure it'd say: "cum unto me my dearest.." Lol...Oh n truly, so grateful for you always lady :)
Re. '4-Sight...'
11th Mar 2018 2:19pm
very wonderfully constructed art indeed!
it is very beautiful..
concise, yet
a deep sea's wonders
splash & refresh my mind..
H
it is very beautiful..
concise, yet
a deep sea's wonders
splash & refresh my mind..
H
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12th Mar 2018 9:09am
Wow...amazing to see your warmth on my page again...very honored n happy to hear from you my baby... n big thanks for the RL! :)