Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Yes, that number,
some dread it,
some look forward to it,
and most hope theirs are
multiplied by the thousands.
The peer, poet, and friend's
brevity carries a wise truth worth
contemplating, in the acceptance of it.
some dread it,
some look forward to it,
and most hope theirs are
multiplied by the thousands.
The peer, poet, and friend's
brevity carries a wise truth worth
contemplating, in the acceptance of it.
10th Mar 2018 6:28am
Welcome
is the peer!
Welcome
is the Friend!
yes
that number.
I don't see a reason
to dread
may be remotely if at all
for the impact that
it will have on both the people
and the immediate days that it leaves behind .
peers'
visits
reviews
nothing but honor
for the scribbler and the scribble!
much obliged.
appreciation
immense!
is the peer!
Welcome
is the Friend!
yes
that number.
I don't see a reason
to dread
may be remotely if at all
for the impact that
it will have on both the people
and the immediate days that it leaves behind .
peers'
visits
reviews
nothing but honor
for the scribbler and the scribble!
much obliged.
appreciation
immense!
Anonymous
8th Mar 2018 7:00pm
The days carry numbers, the clocks tick them away...
So much said in so little here, provokes thoughts for sure.
So much said in so little here, provokes thoughts for sure.
10th Mar 2018 6:31am
welcome
is the peer admired!
welcome
is the review insightful!
yes.
the clock indeed, ticks them away!
appreciation
immense
for both
the visit
& the review!
is the peer admired!
welcome
is the review insightful!
yes.
the clock indeed, ticks them away!
appreciation
immense
for both
the visit
& the review!
10th Mar 2018 6:37am
amidst all the encircling gloom n ticking logics..u still shine with instincts n wisdom.soulful infinity is still is what's the essence . eternity, this light(ness)..
10th Mar 2018 6:45am
welcome
is the peer Admired!
welcome
is the honoring review!
humbled truly dear poetess i am.
my God! the wisdom in the review!
someone once said
in their work
"oblivion
is where
time loses its meaning
oblivion
is where
he found peace"
hence
the reference
to oblivion as the beckoning.
yet can't affect
the days and the numbers
they carry on their backs!
appreciation
immense
for the honor!!
is the peer Admired!
welcome
is the honoring review!
humbled truly dear poetess i am.
my God! the wisdom in the review!
someone once said
in their work
"oblivion
is where
time loses its meaning
oblivion
is where
he found peace"
hence
the reference
to oblivion as the beckoning.
yet can't affect
the days and the numbers
they carry on their backs!
appreciation
immense
for the honor!!
10th Mar 2018 4:45pm
very inspired indeed...
the numbers coming
we count them day by day...
what will it be..
should I be scared?
am I scared?
should I be excited..
am I excited??
much, much depth
in those short lines
respects,
H
the numbers coming
we count them day by day...
what will it be..
should I be scared?
am I scared?
should I be excited..
am I excited??
much, much depth
in those short lines
respects,
H
11th Mar 2018 9:06am
welcome
is the peer admired!
welcome
is the Friend and
the in-depth review
insightful.
it is
but an honor
the peer's appreciation.
yes,
the days
they neither stop
nor run
they just keep coming
and going
and the numbers
well those numbers
one of them has been made
for us.
we acknowledge their existence
and make peace with the fact
and what we normally do- l i v e!
:-)
appreciation
immense
for everything!!
is the peer admired!
welcome
is the Friend and
the in-depth review
insightful.
it is
but an honor
the peer's appreciation.
yes,
the days
they neither stop
nor run
they just keep coming
and going
and the numbers
well those numbers
one of them has been made
for us.
we acknowledge their existence
and make peace with the fact
and what we normally do- l i v e!
:-)
appreciation
immense
for everything!!
17th Mar 2018 7:56am
A thought definitely provoked. Each newly #day/month/year I wonder when mine will come due. I'm actually looking forward to oblivion. Deeply insightful, respectfully,
Shadow
Shadow
17th Mar 2018 9:32am
welcome
is the Friend here!
welcome
is the review.
that feeling, wondering is i believe shared by many of us. But having made peace with the fact, the inevitable is a sure sign of wisdom and maturity.
appreciate
immensely
the visit of the peer
the review!
is the Friend here!
welcome
is the review.
that feeling, wondering is i believe shared by many of us. But having made peace with the fact, the inevitable is a sure sign of wisdom and maturity.
appreciate
immensely
the visit of the peer
the review!
17th Mar 2018 1:14pm
I'll take wisdom and maturity, at least I know I won't drown by taking the high road,lol. Thanx goes to the poet who inspiries so many. Respectfully,
Shadow
Shadow
17th Mar 2018 1:21pm
again.
it is but the peers' affection
that they see inspiration in the scribbles that are my pages.
welcome
once again
is the Friend!
it is but the peers' affection
that they see inspiration in the scribbles that are my pages.
welcome
once again
is the Friend!
